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Song Title Challenge #5: Fools of Damnation – The Embrace that Smothers Part 9 by Epica

It’s time for this week’s Song Title Challenge.  (I know it’s later than usual.  I was on the beach.  (And for some reason I’m not $3000 richer.  Must be doing it wrong.))

Write a short piece of fiction, around 300 words, using the song title as your story title but don’t listen to the song.  Remember to link back to this post so I can find yours.

If you would like to suggest a song title for a future post, you can do so from the challenge page.  You can also leave a suggestion on the Facebook page.

This week’s song is Fools of Damnation – The Embrace that Smothers Part 9 by Epica.  Goodness, that’s a mouthful.  Thanks to Cain Freeman from No BS Books for the suggestion.

I know I did not refer directly to the title in this story, but this is all I could come up with.  Hope you enjoy it.

Fools of Damnation – The Embrace that Smothers

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Autopsy

Doctor Leichmann looked at the body on the table.

“Female, Caucasian, 5.7 metres, red hair, late twenties,” he began his dictation.  “Preliminary examination indicates COD is a single gunshot wound to the chest.”

He measured the entry wound at the back, swabbed for gunshot-residue, and measured the exit wound at the front.  Why did they want him to do an autopsy?  Cause of death was excessively obvious.  Besides, these type of things were usually handled by the county medical examiner, not the Chief of Medicine at a research hospital.

“Making Y-incision.”

Not that it was strictly necessary.  A shotgun at close range opened you up pretty effectively, and by the looks of it pulverised just about everything you’re supposed to check during one of these.  He removed the internal organs, or what was left of them, one by one and measured, weighed, recorded and sampled for the lab.

Something was not right.  He carefully checked inside the chest cavity and studied the X-rays again.  That was really strange.  Even with a through-and-through you’d expect at least some of the pellets to remain, lodged in a rib or vertebra.  But there was not one.  Not a single one.

And what was that strange smell?  He was used to the metallic tang of blood, the sour smell of the stomach-contents and the methane stink of the guts.  But this was strangely sweet, almost like the apple scent you get with diabetics, but not quite the same.

As he contemplated the remains he thought he saw a movement under the skin by her left temple.  That was impossible.  He leaned closer to get a better look.

Copyright © 2013 Herman Kok

Song Title Challenge #1: Nessun Dorma – Giacomo Puccini

The Song Title Challenge was started as a creative exercise started on A Crucible of Scribes, a blog started by some people from the writing course I did last year.  We gave each other song titles, and then you had to write a short piece of fiction based on that title without listening to the song.

I’ve decided I want to make this a regular feature on this blog.  Initially, I’ll be reposting my original pieces from the other blog, but I want to give you the opportunity to also suggest song titles for me.  You’re welcome to give titles for songs in languages other than English – just write them using the Latin alphabet and give the English translation of the title.  Also include the name of the band/artist who originally wrote/performed it.  Make your suggestions using the form on the challenge page.  If I use your title, I’ll include a link to your blog with my post.

I also want you to participate in the challenge.  Write a short piece of fiction, about 300 words, using the song title as your story title.  IMPORTANT: do not listen to the song before you write your piece, so the lyrics of the song won’t influence you.  Leave a link to your post in the comments section.  You’re also welcome to comment on my attempt which appears below.

This week’s challenge:  Nessun Dorma, from the opera Turandot by Giacomo Puccini and made popular again in 1990 by the Italian tenor, Luciano Pavarotti.  In English, the title means “None shall sleep”.  Have fun with it.

Nessun Dorma

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